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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 10, 2017 8:00:48 GMT -8
In my opinion toyknight should continue Ancient Empires Story with Galamar and Valandor.
Original game Ancient Empires Reloaded is more then 10 years old,and even Reloaded is maded as honor to the lost game.
Original version will be totaly forgoten by all except old players.
We should continue upgrading Reloaded version and even make some big changes to the game if is nesesery.
since game could totaly die.so we should continue the story of AE
For example:New Story as new campaign in Reloaded version could be like Legends and original 2 campaigns cannon.
For people that dont know what cannon means that is like the real thing that happened.
Also we should introduce new units to the new players and actualy make the point why are they here.(it would be akward to just be there with no explenaison)
This is my idea on new campaign-my opinion how should it work and how would look.
also i will make videos on yt about every stage and how would work.(if you prefere more version of the video)
dialogs would be updated by the time and other things.
the project have 4 members (i am 1 of them)
and have 4 other people (kevin,felipe...) that i ask theyr opinion about early dialogs that i create.(so here should be more like full stage setup)
So tell me your opinions on the idea and work
Also ignore grammar mistakes and fell free to criticize the dialogs.
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 10, 2017 8:05:06 GMT -8
Stage 1 at the 3 campaign:
Mission objective:King Galamar must survive!!!
Narator:After sucsesful victory over Sith and distruction of the ancient citadel,Galamar and Valandor have recived emergency call from the village itlen mit on the northen side of the kingdom with a request of kings presence him self.
Valandor:After i seew what was Seath capable to do with the power of the crystals...I could not imagine the consequences if we didnt stoped him.
Galamar:Thats now behind us.Now we must focus on the neads of the people.
Captain:Sire we are almost there.We can see the village already from here.
Priest:I can see troops from a distance.They are expecting us.
Galamar:Then we should hurry.
[When they have arrived]
Trooper:What a pleasent suprise your Highness.
Captain:You said that you are in a big problem and demaind kings presence and...Why is the village empty?
Trooper:You know...we are not in any problem...but...i could not say the same thing about the king...
Priest:?!
Captain:Assasins!
Galamar:This is a trap!
[After you defeat all of the enemies]
Valandor:I had a bad felling about this from the start!
Galamar:So why didnt you told us?!
Valandor:I dont know,it would sound too much cliche.
Captain:Sire, in enemy ranks are some strange troops...more like soldiers?
Priest:Those are Paladins...Ancient warriors from an old order.My king,we must not underestimate them at any cost!
[After battle]
Galamar:Who could possible stand behind this?...
Valandor:We have defeated Sith and now this?Idont think this is a small rebellion ore something similar.
Captain:They used black uniforms...
Galamar:Yeas,and that is worries me...Meaby Sith have prepeared something ore somebody...
Valandro:Me and the priest will go to the old temple of wisdome.To find any informations about those paladins and and are theyr skills could be learned.
Galamar:Good,i am counting on you brother.We will continue on the north and try finding any informations about attackers.
Valandor:seya soon brother.
Galamar:Let us go.
Captain:Yeas sir!
ALso units at the village are suposed to turn black and get rienforcments afther they get defeated.
picture:
file:///C:/Users/PCB/Documents/Bandicam/bandicam%202017-12-08%2014-07-16-903.jpg
Video:Created
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Post by adrian on Dec 12, 2017 0:06:22 GMT -8
Just wow! I agree to make 3rd Campaning mussions i would like to play new missions this is very good idea because there no more new missions since .. i dont rember  |
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 12, 2017 5:21:14 GMT -8
Just wow! I agree to make 3rd Campaning mussions i would like to play new missions this is very good idea because there no more new missions since .. i dont rember Thanks for your opinion Andrian.Also other ideas are welcome! |
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 12, 2017 9:05:01 GMT -8
Stage 2 at the 3 campaign:
Mission objective:Turne excends 25
starting gold 150 unit capacity 15
Demon Lord:Well,well,what do we have here.
Galamar:You demons doeshant know when you are beaten.
Demon Lord:Beaten!Thise battles that you fought are nothing close compared to what is comming to this ruined kingdom...You havent sew nothing litle king...And now becaus there are no crystals left to protect your kingdom...Now you are easy target...Becaus the destruction is coming and its going to be big!
Galamar:!?
Captain:Your magesty ,we could make our stand at the fortress on the east.
Galamar:We must hurry captain becaus we dont have much time...we must informeour allies and Valandor about the situation that we are in.
[After the battle]
Demon Lord:Patetic worms...You will fail to protect everyone on time...defeats will be...fire...blood...pain...suffering...
[Galamar cuts Demon Lord down]
Demon Lord:AGHHhhh!!
Narator:The black figure that have standed in front of the king is now been reducet to just a pile of armor and shadow that turned runing to the north in panic.
Galamar:We dont have time for this.Captain,ready the troops for departure.
Captain:But your magesty...tropes are really tired from the battle and the path...i recommend to let the troops rest beffore we continue foward.
Galamar:We dont have time to rest captain,we must go foward.Send the message to Valandor about our curent situation that we are in.
Captain:Yeas your magesty...
Captain:You hearded the king,foward!
Video:Not Created
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Post by rezatim on Dec 12, 2017 13:43:08 GMT -8
Also new Character appearance from dialogs
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 12, 2017 13:54:38 GMT -8
Also new Character appearance from dialogs i have some new characters in mind but i am not shure still how to introduce them. |
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 13, 2017 0:55:43 GMT -8
Stage 3 at the 3 campaign:
mission objective:Defend...Galamar:Wizard of the high order,i came...Wizard:We aleready know why are you here your magesty and we are really thankful for your arrival.But you came to late and in such a small number....Galamar:You think?!Wizard:Yeas my king...they are certainly destroyed...Galamar:But...Wizard:Pull yourself together my king...Becaus evil forces so great and big is coming at as in this hour!If we are not ready now...no one will experience next morning...Demons from the deepest of hell are coming in this direction!If we dont stop them here...None other will...
Captain:Your magesty...They are coming...Orders..?Galamar:Prepear your sealfsCaptain:They are coming!Prepare the defences!Dont let enemy to breaks in!Galamar:What can men do against such reckless hate...
[Battle starts]
[10 turns after the battle]Galamar:I had enough of this!If i couldnt save them...i will not lose my man NOW!!!Foward troops in new victory!!!Doeshant maters what happens,good will always triumph over evil!!!Because of that push foward without FEAR!!![when they start creating a bridge]Galamar:Strange,i can remmember they destroyed that same bridge becaus of me before,and now they ra erepairing it.How poor from there part.
[Galamars leadership mocked enemys moral]
[all enemy troops losted 5 health on the battle field this turn]Captain:They are trying to cross !!Galamar:Let them come!I will persnely cut theyr meaningles lives![Galamars leadership granted you 2000 gold]
[20 turns after the start of the battle]
Galamar:It doeshant maters who or what is standing in front of you,even dragon,balrog or a kraken,you will not lose hope becaus you are the troopers of Torin!Soilders of justice,honor and morale,whatever enemy you are facing you will stang with cold look in your eyes and defend what is dear in your hearts.Starting of your fammilies!!!Friends!!!Kids!!!Galamar:But know this...this is not the day when wi will fall!!!Captain:My king....[Galamars inspirational speach have given your troops 100 healt this turn and future 4 turns
[After 30 turns from the start of the stage]Galamar:Now...i am not asking you as the king...but like your closest brother..becaus if we fall today..none one would stand in theyr way..i am not commanding anymore...than the kingdom that we are fighting for!!!
Captain:You have hearded the king!No fear!Onely VICTORY EXISTS!!!!
Galamar:FOWARD!!![Galamars speach have awekend the fire in kings troops becaus they know that they will not be defeated!]
[All your troops are geting 120 health next turn and all your trups are automatic promoted to lvl 3,even when you recrute new units from the fortress]Captain:Victory!!Galamar:GOD have saved us!!!Wizard:  Galamar:We must continue foward!Narator:After such a sucsesfull victory over enemy,army was now to tired and exhausted to continue the path.But Galamar could not wheit to long so he continue the path with exhausted troops.Could he overcome obstacles that are in his way.Well with this leader,army should not fear at all. Video:Not created
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Post by DarkHunter on Dec 13, 2017 22:33:15 GMT -8
Wow, really great idea, and i can make sure that you has use so much time to help toyknight make update idea !
But, hhh.
It's quite sad to always see that toyknight didn't reply some idea threads
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Post by W on Dec 13, 2017 22:40:43 GMT -8
Well, i really love your idea, it can be great storyline. No problem with stage 1 , that really good designed.
But, i think some dialogue in stage 2 and 3 need some change. I not so like the dialogue designed. That seems to long and some people will not so understand some line. I recommend to make some dialogue more simple.
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Post by W on Dec 13, 2017 22:47:44 GMT -8
For example :
Dialogue no.3 stage 2 changed to
Demon : Beaten? This battle is nothing than what is coming into your ruined kingdom ! There are no crystal left to protect your kingdom. Now, you're easy target
Dialogue no.6 stage 3 changed to
Wizard : An big evil forces is coming !! We are not ready now. If we don't stop them, no one will still alive tommorow !!
Dialogue no.15 stage 3 changed to
Galamar : No problem who standing in our front, we will never lose ! We are the troopers of thorin ! Soldier of justice, honor, and glory !
Dialogue no.16 stage 3 chaged to
Galamar : we will not fall today !!
That will be more short, simple, and more understandable
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 13, 2017 23:33:10 GMT -8
For example : Dialogue no.3 stage 2 changed to Demon : Beaten? This battle is nothing than what is coming into your ruined kingdom ! There are no crystal left to protect your kingdom. Now, you're easy target Dialogue no.6 stage 3 changed to Wizard : An big evil forces is coming !! We are not ready now. If we don't stop them, no one will still alive tommorow !! Dialogue no.15 stage 3 changed to Galamar : No problem who standing in our front, we will never lose ! We are the troopers of thorin ! Soldier of justice, honor, and glory ! Dialogue no.16 stage 3 chaged to Galamar : we will not fall today !! That will be more short, simple, and more understandable well i think we shoul have longer dialogs becaus i want to make characters with personalaties for example:I want Galamar to be some sort of leader figure and to add diferent personalaties to the story for demons,well theyr dialogs was auways long since they are overconfident and all that. in any way thanks for the idea,i will considure it when i start making other stages. |
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 13, 2017 23:36:38 GMT -8
Wow, really great idea, and i can make sure that you has use so much time to help toyknight make update idea ! But, hhh. It's quite sad to always see that toyknight didn't reply some idea threads Thanks DHunter!I know.I wonder what he thinks about idea XD also i wil create videos on stage 2 and 3 on my chanell in a few days so check them out. (there you can see my map design and more presize info about stages) |
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Post by toyknight on Dec 14, 2017 8:09:48 GMT -8
Thanks for your idea. Actually I was planning to start working on new campaigns during Christmas. I will be sure to take your idea into consideration.  |
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 14, 2017 12:29:57 GMT -8
Thanks for your idea. Actually I was planning to start working on new campaigns during Christmas. I will be sure to take your idea into consideration. Thanks toyknight for your opinion on the idea.I really wanted to make some interesting story that will continue Galamars and Valandors path. Also to get some onely-story troops and finall boss.also i will make video for each stage to show the total idea and stage creation. also if you have time could you rank the dialogs of these 3 stages and tell me your opinion on scale from 1 to 10.also with reasons |
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