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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 14, 2017 12:57:08 GMT -8
Thanks for your idea. Actually I was planning to start working on new campaigns during Christmas. I will be sure to take your idea into consideration. The motive of story is: 1.3 crystals have ben destroided and they cannot protect the kingdom any more.(that was seaths plan from the start) 2.and there is actualy 4 crystals-life,wisdom,courage and death also known as heart of the beast. 3.demon forces would launch strong attack on the kingdom where kingdom take some serius loses.(city of torin is destroided and home of aqua elements) 4.aqua elements will join watter kingdom that was at first home of ice elements and mermaids.(i think that could be cool if we have 2 kingdom) 5.Galamar and Valandor have ben forced to find the forgoten ancient city (Name is Whitecity.not white city) that was destroided when theyr father Feriandor fought end repelded the last march othe demons in the 5 era. 6.They will try to destroi the black crystal that was in posesion of the demons. 7.demons will resurect Seth and he will join his brother (bob XD,just kiding) 8.legendery forces will help galamar and valandor in battle.(troops that are once Feriandors. 9.Demons awekens the Devourer of Cosmos.The worm that is longer than 10 blocks.... 10.Galamar and Valandor does not have too much hope that they have chance agenst the monster. 11.Valandor comes for help from the red army to help him.but they refused and atacked him at first.but in the end they have joined valandors cous. 12.At the very end of the world.Now 3 kings are standing with no fear or losen hope to comfront the demon of cosmos. 4 armys,1 destruction and city of hope.Will we see the city in the next morning...i gues that even i doeshant know. also keep thise things in mind devoura souposted to be at 2% of streanght.(seath neads to mention that in the story.) the 4 crystal neads to be black (also change other colours of the crystals becaus of that) 3 kingdoms-Galamars,Valandors and watter king(remember that aqua element at battle of torin prequel?) 4 armys-red,blue(watter that is part of the armys)and green that neads to be stronger and diffrent than other regular troops.and green at the end will continue theyr path to west... so this is all in short tell me your opinion and foughts about idea.(i worked hard to make the story if you understand me,also my friends lefted the project... -_- so i am making this alone now...)
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Post by rezatim on Dec 14, 2017 13:51:13 GMT -8
Yeah It's confirmed!
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Post by DarkHunter on Dec 15, 2017 2:08:10 GMT -8
For example : Dialogue no.3 stage 2 changed to Demon : Beaten? This battle is nothing than what is coming into your ruined kingdom ! There are no crystal left to protect your kingdom. Now, you're easy target Dialogue no.6 stage 3 changed to Wizard : An big evil forces is coming !! We are not ready now. If we don't stop them, no one will still alive tommorow !! Dialogue no.15 stage 3 changed to Galamar : No problem who standing in our front, we will never lose ! We are the troopers of thorin ! Soldier of justice, honor, and glory ! Dialogue no.16 stage 3 chaged to Galamar : we will not fall today !! That will be more short, simple, and more understandable well i think we shoul have longer dialogs becaus i want to make characters with personalaties for example:I want Galamar to be some sort of leader figure and to add diferent personalaties to the story for demons,well theyr dialogs was auways long since they are overconfident and all that. in any way thanks for the idea,i will considure it when i start making other stages. Hmmm........i more agree with Kevin's idea. Because : 1. Longer dialogue will waste more space, so toyknight need to use smaller font to make the dialogue have enough space. No problem, for person whoo using big device, but for person who using small phone/device, the font will really small and hard to read. 2. Honestly, at first time i not so understamd with some dialogue/line, but after Kevin make it more simply, i starting understand the dialogue 3. Some player not so interested to read the dialogue if that is too long, they're not lazy, they just not so interested with the story if containing too long dialogue I think considering Kevin's idea will great No hate comment, just suggestion
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Post by W on Dec 15, 2017 2:20:04 GMT -8
well i think we shoul have longer dialogs becaus i want to make characters with personalaties for example:I want Galamar to be some sort of leader figure and to add diferent personalaties to the story for demons,well theyr dialogs was auways long since they are overconfident and all that. in any way thanks for the idea,i will considure it when i start making other stages. Hmmm........i more agree with Kevin's idea. Because : 1. Longer dialogue will waste more space, so toyknight need to use smaller font to make the dialogue have enough space. No problem, for person whoo using big device, but for person who using small phone/device, the font will really small and hard to read. 2. Honestly, at first time i not so understamd with some dialogue/line, but after Kevin make it more simply, i starting understand the dialogue 3. Some player not so interested to read the dialogue if that is too long, they're not lazy, they just not so interested with the story if containing too long dialogue I think considering Kevin's idea will great No hate comment, just suggestion Thanks
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Post by W on Dec 15, 2017 2:35:07 GMT -8
Thanks for your idea. Actually I was planning to start working on new campaigns during Christmas. I will be sure to take your idea into consideration. The motive of story is: 1.3 crystals have ben destroided and they cannot protect the kingdom any more.(that was seaths plan from the start) 2.and there is actualy 4 crystals-life,wisdom,courage and death also known as heart of the beast. 3.demon forces would launch strong attack on the kingdom where kingdom take some serius loses.(city of torin is destroided and home of aqua elements) 4.aqua elements will join watter kingdom that was at first home of ice elements and mermaids.(i think that could be cool if we have 2 kingdom) 5.Galamar and Valandor have ben forced to find the forgoten ancient city (Name is Whitecity.not white city) that was destroided when theyr father Feriandor fought end repelded the last march othe demons in the 5 era. 6.They will try to destroi the black crystal that was in posesion of the demons. 7.demons will resurect Seth and he will join his brother (bob XD,just kiding) 8.legendery forces will help galamar and valandor in battle.(troops that are once Feriandors. 9.Demons awekens the Devourer of Cosmos.The worm that is longer than 10 blocks.... 10.Galamar and Valandor does not have too much hope that they have chance agenst the monster. 11.Valandor comes for help from the red army to help him.but they refused and atacked him at first.but in the end they have joined valandors cous. 12.At the very end of the world.Now 3 kings are standing with no fear or losen hope to comfront the demon of cosmos. 4 armys,1 destruction and city of hope.Will we see the city in the next morning...i gues that even i doeshant know. also keep thise things in mind devoura souposted to be at 2% of streanght.(seath neads to mention that in the story.) the 4 crystal neads to be black (also change other colours of the crystals becaus of that) 3 kingdoms-Galamars,Valandors and watter king(remember that aqua element at battle of torin prequel?) 4 armys-red,blue(watter that is part of the armys)and green that neads to be stronger and diffrent than other regular troops.and green at the end will continue theyr path to west... so this is all in short tell me your opinion and foughts about idea.(i worked hard to make the story if you understand me,also my friends lefted the project... -_- so i am making this alone now...) I still help you in that project XD I didn't left XD Also, they're not left, i has noticed why they didn't amswer : 1. Felipe : 3 month ago i has get they contact and be a good friend. From that i know he is really busy man, so he not so active in forum 2. Imbalanced : since 1-2 month ago he start rarely online -_- i don't know why, maybe he is busy Also, i has copied all your idea and safe it in my phone, so i can still look that without need to open forum. Well, i start get the idea about where the story go. Also, i see that toyknight say he will considering your idea. Christmas day is near, now i quite busy with my own job and with design a event map XD LOL. But, from now i will pay more attention for this idea I has some other suggestion ( in total i has 2 suggest' from now) , i will post that later.
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 15, 2017 12:36:16 GMT -8
well i think we shoul have longer dialogs becaus i want to make characters with personalaties for example:I want Galamar to be some sort of leader figure and to add diferent personalaties to the story for demons,well theyr dialogs was auways long since they are overconfident and all that. in any way thanks for the idea,i will considure it when i start making other stages. Hmmm........i more agree with Kevin's idea. Because : 1. Longer dialogue will waste more space, so toyknight need to use smaller font to make the dialogue have enough space. No problem, for person whoo using big device, but for person who using small phone/device, the font will really small and hard to read. 2. Honestly, at first time i not so understamd with some dialogue/line, but after Kevin make it more simply, i starting understand the dialogue 3. Some player not so interested to read the dialogue if that is too long, they're not lazy, they just not so interested with the story if containing too long dialogue I think considering Kevin's idea will great No hate comment, just suggestion No hate comment? DarkHunter no problem man!XD other ideas and foughts about my idea are really important.If i wanted just to do this alone well why would i post this here?i would directly send the idea to toy knight. so your every comment is important.also for everyone else in this comunity.XD if you would critisize well that is your opinion and than you can also make "me" look about some of my mistakes that i fought there are good but in other wievs its bad.so feal free to tell your opinion and also if you have some ideas too that i could yous.
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 15, 2017 12:41:48 GMT -8
The motive of story is: 1.3 crystals have ben destroided and they cannot protect the kingdom any more.(that was seaths plan from the start) 2.and there is actualy 4 crystals-life,wisdom,courage and death also known as heart of the beast. 3.demon forces would launch strong attack on the kingdom where kingdom take some serius loses.(city of torin is destroided and home of aqua elements) 4.aqua elements will join watter kingdom that was at first home of ice elements and mermaids.(i think that could be cool if we have 2 kingdom) 5.Galamar and Valandor have ben forced to find the forgoten ancient city (Name is Whitecity.not white city) that was destroided when theyr father Feriandor fought end repelded the last march othe demons in the 5 era. 6.They will try to destroi the black crystal that was in posesion of the demons. 7.demons will resurect Seth and he will join his brother (bob XD,just kiding) 8.legendery forces will help galamar and valandor in battle.(troops that are once Feriandors. 9.Demons awekens the Devourer of Cosmos.The worm that is longer than 10 blocks.... 10.Galamar and Valandor does not have too much hope that they have chance agenst the monster. 11.Valandor comes for help from the red army to help him.but they refused and atacked him at first.but in the end they have joined valandors cous. 12.At the very end of the world.Now 3 kings are standing with no fear or losen hope to comfront the demon of cosmos. 4 armys,1 destruction and city of hope.Will we see the city in the next morning...i gues that even i doeshant know. also keep thise things in mind devoura souposted to be at 2% of streanght.(seath neads to mention that in the story.) the 4 crystal neads to be black (also change other colours of the crystals becaus of that) 3 kingdoms-Galamars,Valandors and watter king(remember that aqua element at battle of torin prequel?) 4 armys-red,blue(watter that is part of the armys)and green that neads to be stronger and diffrent than other regular troops.and green at the end will continue theyr path to west... so this is all in short tell me your opinion and foughts about idea.(i worked hard to make the story if you understand me,also my friends lefted the project... -_- so i am making this alone now...) I still help you in that project XD I didn't left XD Also, they're not left, i has noticed why they didn't amswer : 1. Felipe : 3 month ago i has get they contact and be a good friend. From that i know he is really busy man, so he not so active in forum 2. Imbalanced : since 1-2 month ago he start rarely online -_- i don't know why, maybe he is busy Also, i has copied all your idea and safe it in my phone, so i can still look that without need to open forum. Well, i start get the idea about where the story go. Also, i see that toyknight say he will considering your idea. Christmas day is near, now i quite busy with my own job and with design a event map XD LOL. But, from now i will pay more attention for this idea I has some other suggestion ( in total i has 2 suggest' from now) , i will post that later. Well Kevin i didnt talked about you 3 XD. I was talking about other people XD also cant wait to see those 2 post.i want to know what i did wrong this time XD also if you care you could make my dialogs shorter (make shorter versions of the dialogs) and i will mention you on my videos also.XD
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 15, 2017 12:47:13 GMT -8
also could you tell me your opinions on this concept of the campagin idea.and every fought about each number. (Kevin,felipe,Darkhunter and imbalance tell me your opinions especialy) also you ToyKnight since i really whant to know your opinion and foughts.
The motive of story is: 1.3 crystals have ben destroided and they cannot protect the kingdom any more.(that was seaths plan from the start) 2.and there is actualy 4 crystals-life,wisdom,courage and death also known as heart of the beast. 3.demon forces would launch strong attack on the kingdom where kingdom take some serius loses.(city of torin is destroided and home of aqua elements) 4.aqua elements will join watter kingdom that was at first home of ice elements and mermaids.(i think that could be cool if we have 2 kingdom) 5.Galamar and Valandor have ben forced to find the forgoten ancient city (Name is Whitecity.not white city) that was destroided when theyr father Feriandor fought end repelded the last march othe demons in the 5 era. 6.They will try to destroi the black crystal that was in posesion of the demons. 7.demons will resurect Seth and he will join his brother (bob XD,just kiding) 8.legendery forces will help galamar and valandor in battle.(troops that are once Feriandors. 9.Demons awekens the Devourer of Cosmos.The worm that is longer than 10 blocks.... 10.Galamar and Valandor does not have too much hope that they have chance agenst the monster. 11.Valandor comes for help from the red army to help him.but they refused and atacked him at first.but in the end they have joined valandors cous. 12.At the very end of the world.Now 3 kings are standing with no fear or losen hope to comfront the demon of cosmos. 4 armys,1 destruction and city of hope.Will we see the city in the next morning...i gues that even i doeshant know.
also keep thise things in mind devoura souposted to be at 2% of streanght.(seath neads to mention that in the story.) the 4 crystal neads to be black (also change other colours of the crystals becaus of that) 3 kingdoms-Galamars,Valandors and watter king(remember that aqua element at battle of torin prequel?) 4 armys-red,blue(watter that is part of the armys)and green that neads to be stronger and diffrent than other regular troops.and green at the end will continue theyr path to west...
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Post by W on Dec 16, 2017 4:29:37 GMT -8
I still help you in that project XD I didn't left XD Also, they're not left, i has noticed why they didn't amswer : 1. Felipe : 3 month ago i has get they contact and be a good friend. From that i know he is really busy man, so he not so active in forum 2. Imbalanced : since 1-2 month ago he start rarely online -_- i don't know why, maybe he is busy Also, i has copied all your idea and safe it in my phone, so i can still look that without need to open forum. Well, i start get the idea about where the story go. Also, i see that toyknight say he will considering your idea. Christmas day is near, now i quite busy with my own job and with design a event map XD LOL. But, from now i will pay more attention for this idea I has some other suggestion ( in total i has 2 suggest' from now) , i will post that later. Well Kevin i didnt talked about you 3 XD. I was talking about other people XD also cant wait to see those 2 post.i want to know what i did wrong this time XD also if you care you could make my dialogs shorter (make shorter versions of the dialogs) and i will mention you on my videos also.XD Yea, yesterday i see Dark Hunter agreed with my idea. I just working in this idea for now. Also, i write the shorter dialogue in paper ( write in phone/computer really not efficient XD, because i need to scroll up and scroll down multiple times XD) When that dialogue is complete i will send that to here :l
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 16, 2017 4:44:23 GMT -8
Well Kevin i didnt talked about you 3 XD. I was talking about other people XD also cant wait to see those 2 post.i want to know what i did wrong this time XD also if you care you could make my dialogs shorter (make shorter versions of the dialogs) and i will mention you on my videos also.XD Yea, yesterday i see Dark Hunter agreed with my idea. I just working in this idea for now. Also, i write the shorter dialogue in paper ( write in phone/computer really not efficient XD, because i need to scroll up and scroll down multiple times XD) When that dialogue is complete i will send that to here :l ok then.
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Post by W on Dec 16, 2017 16:15:41 GMT -8
also could you tell me your opinions on this concept of the campagin idea.and every fought about each number. (Kevin,felipe,Darkhunter and imbalance tell me your opinions especialy) also you ToyKnight since i really whant to know your opinion and foughts. The motive of story is: 1.3 crystals have ben destroided and they cannot protect the kingdom any more.(that was seaths plan from the start) 2.and there is actualy 4 crystals-life,wisdom,courage and death also known as heart of the beast. 3.demon forces would launch strong attack on the kingdom where kingdom take some serius loses.(city of torin is destroided and home of aqua elements) 4.aqua elements will join watter kingdom that was at first home of ice elements and mermaids.(i think that could be cool if we have 2 kingdom) 5.Galamar and Valandor have ben forced to find the forgoten ancient city (Name is Whitecity.not white city) that was destroided when theyr father Feriandor fought end repelded the last march othe demons in the 5 era. 6.They will try to destroi the black crystal that was in posesion of the demons. 7.demons will resurect Seth and he will join his brother (bob XD,just kiding) 8.legendery forces will help galamar and valandor in battle.(troops that are once Feriandors. 9.Demons awekens the Devourer of Cosmos.The worm that is longer than 10 blocks.... 10.Galamar and Valandor does not have too much hope that they have chance agenst the monster. 11.Valandor comes for help from the red army to help him.but they refused and atacked him at first.but in the end they have joined valandors cous. 12.At the very end of the world.Now 3 kings are standing with no fear or losen hope to comfront the demon of cosmos. 4 armys,1 destruction and city of hope.Will we see the city in the next morning...i gues that even i doeshant know. also keep thise things in mind devoura souposted to be at 2% of streanght.(seath neads to mention that in the story.) the 4 crystal neads to be black (also change other colours of the crystals becaus of that) 3 kingdoms-Galamars,Valandors and watter king(remember that aqua element at battle of torin prequel?) 4 armys-red,blue(watter that is part of the armys)and green that neads to be stronger and diffrent than other regular troops.and green at the end will continue theyr path to west... Umm... maybe for now i can't make any opinion about that idea. Yea, now i know to where tha story going. But for now i just get dialogue of stage 1-3. The story is working well, great idea. I will give my opinion later, for now i didn't know, maybe the story will be great.
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 17, 2017 15:21:01 GMT -8
well i think we shoul have longer dialogs becaus i want to make characters with personalaties for example:I want Galamar to be some sort of leader figure and to add diferent personalaties to the story for demons,well theyr dialogs was auways long since they are overconfident and all that. in any way thanks for the idea,i will considure it when i start making other stages. Hmmm........i more agree with Kevin's idea. Because : 1. Longer dialogue will waste more space, so toyknight need to use smaller font to make the dialogue have enough space. No problem, for person whoo using big device, but for person who using small phone/device, the font will really small and hard to read. 2. Honestly, at first time i not so understamd with some dialogue/line, but after Kevin make it more simply, i starting understand the dialogue 3. Some player not so interested to read the dialogue if that is too long, they're not lazy, they just not so interested with the story if containing too long dialogue I think considering Kevin's idea will great No hate comment, just suggestion also forgot to say that font doeshant neads to be smaller
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Post by W on Dec 27, 2017 20:38:43 GMT -8
Hello, DjEnErAl XD I'm back Maybe i will try to post the shorter dialogue tommorow XD I just sick in past
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Post by NDjeneralBN on Dec 27, 2017 23:48:51 GMT -8
Hello, DjEnErAl XD I'm back Maybe i will try to post the shorter dialogue tommorow XD I just sick in past after you post shorter version i will post dialog for new stage
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Post by W on Dec 31, 2017 1:20:14 GMT -8
Sorry DJeneral Yesterday my friend sick, so i go to hospital, to watch him. Maybe i will post that this night It's 16:19 or 4:19PM now in Indonesia
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